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Originally Posted by jlw

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Paste the body of your e-mail from your boilerplate file. This is what I use:

My name is Jordan Lee Wagner, and I am the owner of the internet domain: TopHotrods.com. I am writing to you because I am offering this domain for sale, and wonder if American Street Rod would be interested in acquiring this domain. Please feel free to contact me if you have interest in acquiring this domain, or if this information sparks any questions. Thanks for your attention.

Doubled interest in two sentences!?
interested in acquiring ... interest in acquiring?

What about ...

We feel convinced the domain name www.xyz.com would be another important marketing tool, and a valuable asset of eletronic property for XYZ. instead of and wonder if American Street Rod would be interested

I am looking forward hearing from you. sounds better to me than ...
Thanks for your attention !?

Also europeans always like with kind regards or best regards !?