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Title: Domain Name XXXX.com for sale Hello,
I am XXXX, owner of the internet domain name: www.XXXX.com
I am currently offering this domain for sale. Domains are growing in value each year as you will discover by reading DNJournal's weekly domain name sales articles: http://www.dnjournal.com/domainsales.htm
Should your organization have interest in acquiring this domain name, please feel free to contact me with an offer at your earliest convenience. In this age of computer technology, having an online presense with a premium and memorable domain name is key in future business relations. As this is an important and rare opportunity for your business I ask that you pass this letter onto the person responsible for gaining new business for your organisation.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Best regards,
XXXX XXXX
XXXX@ixxxx.com
Tel.0042 333 555 66666
Land
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Edits:
Took out exclamation points (makes you seem more serious) took out uneccessary commas, changed some of the wording, took out the PS and incorporated it. You had "auction" in the subject line yet "for sale" in the body so I changed it to "for sale."
Someone else could fine tune this more I am sure. 
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